As an artist, sometimes I just hate my work as I'm working on it and then see its merit when I can sit back and view the result. This is one of those pages. As I was drawing it, everything looked wrong, but I really like how it turned out.
Gobsmacked by the heart in this story, the writing is superb, and the art is fantastic. Love the emotion in the faces and even-more-love their progression from pencilled children to blackly inked adults. It works amazingly. Keep it up!