This page and the next were originally intended to be one page, but during a recent discussion, we decided to split it up. I think the result is much better and keeps with the tone already set in the story.
I love the complete and absolute visible clash of emotions in panel 3. She is angry and combative; he is shocked and speechless as if someone just tore his heart out. You KNOW what he wants to tell her in panel 6, but after her outburst, he won't put himself out there at this much risk. Seriously guys, you're doing an amazing job here- everything is so well-developed and believable that it's hard to believe it's a comic. Are you sure these people aren't real?
This page and the next were originally intended to be one page, but during a recent discussion, we decided to split it up. I think the result is much better and keeps with the tone already set in the story.