Lost 22

13 Jul 2009


dangerface, 13 Jul 2009


A keen eye will notice a fairly big mistake within the last bunch of pages. 20 space-bucks to whoever finds it. 30 space-bucks to anyone who finds a mistake I didn't even notice.

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TacoTotes, 13 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


Whew, well I'm poor, cause I don't see any mistakes, I shall have to go back and look closer, regardless, it's probably not as big as you think.

It makes my day that this has updated, I would wait years for pages if I had to. You guys are a dangerous mix, as it's easily one of the best comics on this site, and I'll probably say that 'til I'm hoarse, but it's true.

Whew, SO MUCH TENSION.

Yazzydream, 13 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


Ah, nice job, Tim. Actually, same for the girl too. You're both idiots. tsk.

Rori, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


Awesome work on the facial expressions, Ben. You get so much out of them without them ever looking cartoony.

Awesome writing, as always, no matter that it's a bit painful to read.

Guest, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


Tim's hair is no longer slicked back?

Guest, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


No, Tim pulled his hair forward a page or two ago

sentiashinou, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


Is it that he has a not-bow-tie for a frame in that page where he's fixing it?

Or am I imagining things.

dangerface, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


TacoTotes> It probably isn't as big as I think, but it's still pretty silly.

Guest> Yeah, Tim mussed his hair while in shock/frustration in panel 1 of page 20.

sentiashinou> Imagining. Tim took off the bow tie when they came outside, and presumably put it in his pocket.

Gibson Twist, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


If it's what I think it is, and I think it might be, it's a difference from the script that doesn't really make much difference at all. At least, it isn't a mistake of any consequence and probably turns out to be more accurate.

Tempest_Lavalle, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


Awwww nooooooo D:

Cultra, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


ahhh.... i want more pages XP

dangerface, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


Mister Gibs> I did deviate from the script a little in that they are standing for most of this conversation, where I believe you had them written as sitting, if that's what you're referring to. Still not what I'm thinking of though.

Gibson Twist, 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


No, that's not what I was talking about. Now, get back in your cage!

Filibusteria (Guest), 14 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


In Lost 20, at panel 7, i think the girl isn't holding her bag in her left shoulder.

dangerface, 15 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


OKAY, SO I'VE MADE A LOT OF MISTAKES!! WHEN DID THIS BECOME A MANHUNT?!?!

Seriously though, what I was referring to is that when they leave the house, there's a storm door outside of the main wooden door, but in the next page it's gone (not to mention that the teardrop windows are reversed), and then in the next it's back again. Continuity folks. I say to hell with it!

Now to my cage...

darkamnios, 15 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


I can feel the anger-pain and all the turmoil of feelings almost inside me as I read...

Simply put.. The best :)

Filibusteria, 20 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


Great Tim's Faces. I love the way you draw.

Mr. Mann (Guest), 22 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!


I also believe that you randomly add and lose the brick texture on the walls of the house

c_arnold, 31 Jul 2009 Reply to this comment!

Wow, this is some deep stuff...
This is some really deep stuff that this story is hitting us with here and I've got to say I like it. This comic of yours is delivering an unexpectedly different story than a good chunk of the stuff around this site, and I like it. Keep it coming.

Marchwind, 27 Mar 2010 Reply to this comment!

She's Wrong!
If she loved Tim that much over the years, why didn't she just say so. I bet he also loved her, but always felt she didn't love him.



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